增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从笫11处起）不计分.

    My experience with a foreign language begins in junior middle school. I had a kind and patient English teacher which often praised all the students. Because his positive method, I eager answered all the questions I could, never worrying much about make mistakes. However, my experience in senior school was very difference from before. When my former teacher had been patient with all the student, my new teacher quickly punished those who gave incorrect answers. As a result, not only did he lose my joy in answering questions, but also I totally lost my desire to say anything at all in the English.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I once get a VIP pass to a huge concert given by one of the most popular rock bands in world. The ticket qualified me to meet all the member of the band backstage but to watch the whole process of setting up for the concert. The guitarist was a man whom was very kind. I did not have much anxiety while getting to know them better, but the rest were more of reserved. They just smiled and made friend gestures. Anyway, watching the stage being set up and all the microphones being checking, I understood how hard it was to putting on a stadium concert. It took hours of preparation to produce quality sound.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 

注意： （1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； （2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

While walking through the high-speed railway station with my father, I came across the young man who asked if he can borrow my cellphone to make a call. He had his phone and wallet been stolen and didn't know how to do. Heard his explanation, my father asked him how much he needed to get home. He replied in a worrying voice,  " About 150 yuan. " My father took out all the cashes in his wallet - about 200 yuan and gave it to the man, which he thanked us again and again. I took greatly pride in our helping him. From the experience, I have learned that it is very reward to kindly help those in need. 

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： （1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； （2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I know a professor who's also a millionaire. A few years ago he have an important invention and made fortune. Although he was very successful, he didn't forget the village children who was suffering from poverty and hungry. He could have lived comfortably so he donated all his money to a village school so that the children would not drop out. He also equipped teachers offices with furniture. Her ultimate goal was for all children to go to school. If he couldn't do so, he would be feel guilty. The professor's kindness has been appreciated for all. It is said that the professor has became a philanthropist（慈善家）.

Yesterday, when I complained with my mom about too little entertainment, she share the story of her youth with me. In the 1980s, neither iPads nor smartphones were invented. Each time when evenings approached, the children around would crowd into the only house where had a television. We stared at the small screen until the program ended. Parent would make every effort to drag their children to bed when it was getting lately. But now, iPads and smartphones have taken place of televisions. No wonder my mom always says we are the generation growing up in a honey jar. After listen to my mom's story I felt lucky to live so a happy and comfortable life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last term, I hosted an exchange student naming Jim from the Great Britain to our school. He really cares for Chinese Culture. Jim asked me to show himself around the city on weekends. I took him to many local place of interest and we also go to the theater to watch a show of Peking Opera. He was so attracted by the performance as he decided to learn it. My father happened know a master of Peking Opera and introduced Jim to him. Jim was great honored to be one of his students. Put his heart into it, Jim made a rapid progress. When he returned to England, he gave a performance, for what he won many admiration from his classmates.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The summer holiday is coming, but it makes me very excitedly. I have been looking forward to relax myself and I'd like to go fishing and climb high mountains. Ride my bicycle is also good for me. I think I can play football or play the chess with my father as well. How a wonderful time I will have during the summer holiday! But my father had different opinions. He does not want me to go out. He's afraid I'll be knocking down by a truck, fall into rivers, fall off a tree or fight with others. What's worse, he's afraid I will be kidnapped. I hate kept in a cage like a bird. I need freedom and I will try his best to persuade my father.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

People always say that us lack the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can't agree completely. I woke up very early and decided to take a walk on last Friday. In the square where much senior citizens were dancing, I find several elders absorbed in feeding birds. Without many cars producing smog on the street, I realized that the city was such clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorated pretty well, which used to be old but out of style. On all sides of the street were big trees covering the whole city, making it comfortable to walk in the city. At that moment, I found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字的符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

More and more people attach great importance relationships in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationships among friends. Polite word can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life.

Always saying "please" and "thank you" will make your friends feeling more comfortable and more willingly to offer help when necessary. We all know that one man's success is based on what he deals with people. Always being grateful to others people's kindness and show your gratitude through the words you say. The more support you win from other people, the more faster you will move towards your goal.

Remember, being polite cost nothing so it's worth a million dollars.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

We students often feel stressed because we have too many homework to do every day. We are such busy studying all day that we don't have free time to do what we are interested. So we always felt very tired. What should we do to relax ourselves then?

First doing sports with some of our classmate is the best way to relax ourselves. It is also good for our healthy. Second, we can also listen to music during the breaks. Third, when we feel tired, go to the movies with our parents on weekends is another good choice, which will help us build a much more closer relationship with them. In short, they should spend a little time on relaxed activities each day.