Hannibal was a general from Carthage, a city on the northern coast of Africa. He thought the ancient Romans and won great battles at a time when the Romans were the most powerful people in the world. His army was small, but it was made up of soldiers from many countries that didn't want to be ruled by the Romans.

Before Hannibal could fight the Romans always had thought would protect them from enemy armies. When winter came, the Romans did not think Hannibal could possibly cross the mountains. Hannibal surprised them. With some of his soldiers riding huge strong elephants—where no elephants had to walk slowly without resting through the mountain snow-storms and howling(怒号)winds. The enemies rolled rocks down to try to stop them. Even raging rivers couldn't stop them. Hannibal's soldiers built rafts(木排)strong enough to carry the elephants across. At last, half of them never reached the end of their journey. But the other half of the army and some of the elephants did finish the journey.

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     I learned early in life that I had to be more patient               ①改为②改为

and little aggressive．From the time I was about four until      ③改为 ④改为

I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy．I was happy         ⑤改为 ⑥改为

when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got         ⑦改为 ⑧改为

angry and broke it．For a while parents bought me new          ⑨改为 ⑩改为

toys．But before long they began to see which was  

happening．When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,

my father said, "That's it．No more toys to you．"

My punishment lasted a year． Meanwhile, I found out

that with more patience I must make my toys to last．

My attitude change from then on．